A Formal Formative Assessment

This a mid-term assessment for final thesis, I talked about the idea of perception and reality. The title of my thesis is

the Phenomenology of Perception and virtual Reality. In terms of the research result and content, I thought I really need try to put more efforts on my research field. According to the comments form mentors, I need to find and build more clear connection towards the conclusion of the Phenomenology and virtual reality.

I though It really helpful for me to rethink my thesis and do more study to develop my idea.